Elevator Pitch No. 3
I unfortunately did not do the last elevator pitch, so I did not receive any feedback. However, I did change some things from the feedback I received from the first pitch. I made an attempt to have higher energy when describing my product. Also, I have done a lot more research, and I have talked to more individuals about my idea, so hopefully my confident level shows in regards to that. Other than that, I received positive feedback and look forward to hearing more reflections on this pitch.
Patrick,
ReplyDeleteI like how you mentioned the benefits of applying your concept to the different sectors from business to residential areas. Also you maintained eye contact which I think is important to selling your pitch. I would like to know how much it would cost for such an undertaking as it may be expensive but I think it would be worth it to go green. Great job.
Patrick, I think you really took the feedback and made the changes to make your pitch that much better. You can really show how passionate you are for you product making the listener that much more confident in you. If you were to add a couple more facts about the value of paying a higher price for going green you could really sell your listeners.
ReplyDeleteI think you looked very much in control during your pitch. I did not do the first elevator pitch, so I know what it is like to have to improve on something that did not take place. I think it is a really good idea, as I believe electric cars are going to only increase in popularity until they occupy the market share currently take by combustion engines.
ReplyDeleteHello Patrick, even though you weren't able to get any feedback from the previous pitch, I think you did really well collecting the feedback from the very first one. You did everything you could to make every aspect of your pitch better, and it really showed.
ReplyDeleteHi Patrick,
ReplyDeleteAlthough you weren't able to get any feedback from the last pitch, I think you did great in using the feedback from the first one in order to make this one better. I think if you put in some more facts about electric cars, it would definitely sell more o your audience.
I know how difficult it can be to improve from something that never happened. It is theoretically impossible but I think that your effort showed in your pitch. I think the idea is one that is there for the taking, as many people in our generation at least plan to buy electric when they can afford it. Your idea is well thought out and I hope to see your charging stations soon!
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